The old man and the sand monster

There once was an old man. He had no money. He was very poor. He could not go a kilometer a day. he had no shoes. His feet were extremely hot. Suddenly the ground started to shake. The poor man fell down and the sand monster who had spikes on his back and fiery eyes ate the man up. But his skin was so wrinkly and yukky and his feet extremely hot that it burnt the sand monsters tongue. So he spat him out. He was covered in slime.

This is Callum's story. Isn't it fantastic? He did it when it was writing time yesterday. We were impressed because he used heaps of wow words to explain what he really wanted it to be. This made it really interesting. Well done Callum!